Haiku game - 1 Word games

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Haiku game - 1
  • Richard Moxham at 2015-09-11

    Okay, here at Sust Larki's suggestion.  The rule is that you post one line each of a haiku (first line 5 syllables, second 7, third 5), and at the end of three lines you have a little poem - so continuity is very important.

    First line coming up, then…

    “Far in the distance

  • Richard Moxham at 2015-09-11

    [By the way, I suggest that the second contributor posts both lines, and the third contributor all three, so we can see the thing more clearly as it builds.]

  • christian freeling at 2015-09-11

    Far in the distanceAnd in the blink of an eye

  • christian freeling at 2015-09-11

    How does one insert a break here?

  • Richard Moxham at 2015-09-11

    Far in the distance

    and in the blink of an eye

    a rock flaps skyward.

  • Richard Moxham at 2015-09-11

    [You miss a line]

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