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Okay, here at Sust Larki's suggestion. The rule is that you post one line each of a haiku (first line 5 syllables, second 7, third 5), and at the end of three lines you have a little poem - so continuity is very important.
First line coming up, then…
“Far in the distance
[By the way, I suggest that the second contributor posts both lines, and the third contributor all three, so we can see the thing more clearly as it builds.]
Far in the distanceAnd in the blink of an eye
How does one insert a break here?
Far in the distance
and in the blink of an eye
a rock flaps skyward.
[You miss a line]